WALT write a timed recount about a time
when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
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when and where you did something special
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who was with you
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what you did (think about the order you did things)
·
how you felt and why you felt this way.
By Natalie Robertson
When I was with my
family I was very worried about coming to Christchurch but I was with my
family. I was safe but also I was scared because I miss my friends but I loved
my family most so I stayed close then we went to our new house and…
Next
steps
You need to write a little faster to give a
lot more details to make your story clear to the reader.
When you came to Christchurch where did you
come from?
Who were the friends that you missed?
